Today in class, I reviewed and revised my paper. I went through and weeded out the unnecessary sentences and details throughout my paper. I took into account all of the feedback I have been provided with. Seeing this allowed me to understand my weaker areas in writing. I struggle with creating a strong thesis, as well as the usage of second person. I need to provide more in depth, researched facts in the final draft. After creating a stronger thesis, I plan to reflect each paragraph back to the thesis, stating my argument. After a lot of editing, I hope to come out with a stronger and more effective essay.
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October 2015
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